Fine line part 1
People say that the line between fantasy and reality is a fine one that can easily get blurred off. Well, they were right!
People say that the line between fantasy and reality is a fine one that can easily get blurred off. Well, they were right!
First Chapter of many if they are requested/if the story is liked. Happy to take suggestions.
It was morning and I was beginning to wake up. I noticed that I was waking up with some good, old fashioned morning wood and was trying to stay asleep to enjoy whatever dream was making me hard this morning. The dream felt so real, it felt as though someone was really stroking my cock. It was all so vivid. It definitely wasn’t my hand, it felt too small and soft. This was incredible, the best dream ever! Then it took a turn my sex dreams never took – I felt a strange feeling in my ass!
Suddenly I realized what was happening. I remembered that I wasn’t alone in bed. I remembered my friend Beth was visiting. I remembered she had found the strap on dildo last night in my apartment. I remembered that she had put it on during our game of Truth or Dare the night before and fucked my ass with it. And I remembered that she went to bed with it still on.
I turned my head to look behind me and see her. “Did you have fun last night?” she asked seductively.
“Of course I did. I always have fun with you.”
“Do you remember our new arrangement?”
“Not at all.”
“What is the new agreement then?” She wanted to hear me say it.
“You are the only one that can make dares now. I have to do anything you want. I am now your bitch for the weekend.”
Beth was rubbing her dildo through my ass crack. As I said those last words the stroking quickened. She was obviously turned on from hearing me say she was in control.
“Are you ready for another ass fucking then?”
“I am ready for anything you want me to do, Beth.”
Her left hand was still reaching around, stroking my cock as we both laid on our right sides. I felt the phallus slide through my cheeks a few more times before after one down stroke it stopped.
“Pull your cheeks apart!”
I reached my left hand back, grabbed my left cheek and pulled it up, giving Beth access to my ass hole. I felt the tip touch my brown hole and then slight pressure. I wanted to feel the cock back inside of me and I felt myself pushing back onto the strap on. Beth pushed forward, my ass relaxed and I felt the head split my crack and push in. She held it there for a second letting me adjust to my anal intruder and feel the round head before she began pushing in more.
Beth wasn’t taking her time being nice and slow while entering me like she had last night. Once she began pushing she just kept going. I felt every inch of the toy sliding past my sphincter muscle. I felt every “vein” of the cock as it slid into me. And then I felt the head pressing against my prostate.
“Oh fuck you are so deep inside of me!”
“I bet I can get it deeper. Would you like to feel me deeper inside your ass?” Beth hissed into my ear.
Without waiting for a reply, Beth took her hand from my cock, placed it on my hips and pushed forward as far as she possibly could. The dildo she was wearing pressed against me from the inside and felt like she was trying to push it through my stomach.
She pulled back and I again felt every ridge of the cock slide across me, just in reverse this time. As the cock began to almost exit me, I felt the pull of Beth’s hand on my hip as her waist moved forward again thrusting the rubber toy back into me. She picked up her pace, moving her hips back and forth, the toy sliding in and out. I loved every second of it. I felt so hard and soft at the same time sliding in and out of me. I could hear Beth breathing in my ear. Her lust was evident. She was loving the power of being on the fucking end of things for once.
“Fuck yeah, take my cock you little bitch! You like your ass filled, don’t you? You love feeling me fuck you deep!”
And I did! Each time she pushed it deep inside me I moaned like a bitch in heat. I never wanted her to take the tool out of me.
I felt Beth shift her weight to her left and made us both roll off of our right sides and onto our stomachs without ever removing the dildo from my ass. Beth’s weight was now on top of me. She moved up onto her elbows, pulled her knees up more and pushed deep inside of me again. In her new position, Beth had even more control and began grinding her pelvis into my ass. Each stroke went all the way out until just the tip was left inside me and then she slammed the entire length back into me.
My dick was pressed against the bed and each thrust also brought with it the pleasure of friction against my shaft. The new sensation was amazing and was making it hard not to cum. Beth seemed to read my mind.
“Don’t you fucking cum yet!” she demanded. “I have another dare planned for that. You let me know when you think you can’t hang on any longer. Until then, just keep enjoying me inside your ass!”
Beth was so worked up now that she couldn’t stop her dirty talk.
“You really love this thing inside of you, huh? I bet you are starting to wonder what a real cock would feel like inside your ass. Would you like that? I know I would like to watch it. That would be so hot, watching some guy ass fuck you!”
She didn’t wait for any answers, just kept turning herself on more with her talk. She was pounding my tight hole. Each thrust carried as much force as she could muster. The bed rocked into the wall each time she pushed it back inside of me. My bed was squeaking and I could only imagine what my downstairs neighbors were thinking!
It was all too much now. I couldn’t last much longer. The fucking had lasted at least 20 minutes and I needed to cum!
“I’m ready to cum, Beth.”
She pulled out of me in one long motion and stood on the bed.
“Roll onto your back. Good, now throw your legs back so you are doubled over with your ass in the air.”
I did as I was told. Beth moved above me, put one leg on each side of me, bent her knees and sunk the dildo back into my ass. She just resumed her fucking in this awkward position. She was sliding into me like a piston in a car engine. I also noticed how close my dick was to my face.
“Are you ready for your next dare?” she asked as she continued thrusting downward. “I dare you to open your mouth, cum on your own face and swallow as much as you can shoot into your mouth!”
Beth kept fucking me, the whole time looking straight down, not taking a chance to miss me giving myself a facial. Each thrust brought my cock closer to my mouth and I wondered if it were possible to give myself a blow job from this position. I was past the point of no return. I needed to cum. As I watched the sexy, slender red head above me repeatedly slam a strap on dildo into my ass, I opened my mouth and began to stroke my cock.
“Oh yes! You’re going to do this! Fuck yeah! Shoot your load all over your face! I want to watch you swallow your own cum so badly! Fucking cum for me!”
Beth’s comments were leaving her mouth as fast as her dildo was penetrating me. Then it happened. The first shot missed my mouth and made me flinch as it landed just below my left eye. I readjusted in time and the second shot landed right on my tongue. So did the second and third before the fourth and fifth missed again and coated my face. I was then done with shots of my load and just moved my cock back over my mouth to let the last few dribbles fall onto my waiting tongue.
“Don’t swallow yet!” Beth demanded as she pulled the dildo out of my ass and let my legs fall back to the bed. “Sit up and open wide!”
She reached over and grabbed her camera and snapped pictures of the sticky jizz in my mouth and on my face. “I am going to cum so hard when I masturbate to these back home! Ok, swallow now.”
I did as was told and felt the creamy mess slide down my throat. I then licked as much as I could off of my lips. Then Beth scooped as much of my spunk off of my chin as possible and fed it to me. Each time I swallowed my seed right down. Each time I enjoyed it more.
“Fuck that was hot!” exclaimed Beth. “Now, clean my dick off like a good little bitch. Taste the remnants of shit you left on my pole you dirty little whore!”
I got on my knees and took the dildo into my mouth and slid my mouth down the shaft, licking it as I went, tasting the muskiness of my own ass. Beth was looking down on me, enjoying treating me like her bitch as I sucked her cock. I felt her pushing farther with each thrust – Beth was trying to get me to deepthroat the rod. My throat began to relax and accommodate more and more of the intruder, just as my ass had done.
“That’s it,” she said approvingly. “Take me in your throat. You are becoming quite the cocksucker and fucker. You could really please some guys cock. I know you are pleasing mine. Now, open up and take it all!”
Beth reached her right hand around the back of my head and began to push as she slowly thrust her hips forward. The object met with resistance the back of my throat, but it was quickly obvious that she would not be pulling backward until she couldn’t push any farther. I began to consciously contort my throat muscles, trying to find a way to take the entire length. Beth began to increase the pressure on the back of my head. There was maybe a quarter inch left to go and Beth pushed my head and jabbed her hips forward and my lips were around the base of the toy – my nose touching her flat stomach. I had taken the entire thing. Since she had gotten it this far into my ass, too, I could taste dried shit every millimeter along the way.
“Look up at me! That’s good! Fuck, I think I can see the shape of it in your throat!”
Beth reached over to my nightstand and grabbed my camera and snapped a picture. She then proceeded to slide the dildo out of my mouth in half inch increments, taking a picture each time she stopped.
“Does this thing have a video function to it?” It did. And Beth found it. For being a small little camera it had surprisingly good video quality and it also recorded sound. She aimed the lens at herself and recorded an intro.
“Hi, this is Beth. I am making my little bitch boy Patrick suck my strap on dildo after I just fucked his ass good and deep with it. I hope you enjoy watching.”
She then trained the camera back down on me and told me to suck her good. I was a little uneasy about the camera, but I wasn’t going to disappoint! I grabbed her hips and pulled my mouth forward as far as possible making myself deepthroat her this time. That received some very positive commentary from her on the video as she kept a running dialogue of the entire event. I got into a good pace. The cock slid past my lips, into my mouth and down my throat. Then slid out of my throat, past my tongue and then the tip was on my lips.
I was sucking her nicely. My throat had adapted to the pole being pushed into it with each thrust and a good amount of saliva had built up acting as lube. But Beth wanted to put on a show for the camera, so she grabbed my head again and began thrusting. She was going all the way in each time, but was moving much faster. She was fucking my face. Saliva was flowing freely and I was drooling out of the sides of my mouth from her fucking. I felt so depraved and I loved it! Finally, Beth slammed her cock home into the back of my throat and instead of pulling back out as I expected, she left the member choking me. My eyes were bugging out of my head as I looked up at her, pleading her with my eyes to take it out and let me breath again. Beth loved it and she told the camera so. At last, she pulled the cock from my throat and my mouth completely. I gasped for air deeply, inhaling as much as possible!
Beth again turned the camera on herself saying, “Now THAT, my friends, is how you suck a cock! I hope you enjoyed watching my slut Patrick blow me!” And she turned the camera off.
“We need two things now,” declared Beth. “First, we need to find a web site to post this video and two, to record more!” And she bent over, kissed me deeply on the lips, and walked out of my bedroom to my computer, leaving me still on my knees. I couldn’t wait for more!
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Ms. Lewis has a session with Pierce, Brook learns about Rachel, and Rachel is completely and totally fucking insane…I mean I created her, but still, she is just crazy, so fucking crazy!!
You may call me Mark Lupin
I don’t want to seem cold or anything, but I would prefer it if you did not know my true name. I’m 16 years old and I live in Canada. I’m white, not too tall, but I’m very strongly built. It’s not like I had rock hard abs or anything, but I’m pretty large and muscular. My hair is long and dark brown, just like my eyes. I may be young, but I still have a little beard I need to shave every once in a while.
I’m smart, very smart and also very popular even if I’m quite the nerd. But Dungeon and Dragons and LARPG aren’t all my life, I’m also a sportive. For years I trained in Martial Arts, was captain of a football team and I just started Crossfit. My family is… well we are rich. Considering all of this, people could say I had everything: friends, brains, looks, class, money. But there was one thing I never had: Women.
This drove me crazy. I had anything every teenager could dream about, except girlfriends. Even if I was sixteen, I never had any girlfriend. It’s not cause I was shy or anything, girls just didn’t seem to want to date me. It made me angry or sad at times, but I knew to find comfort in little things. That is why I was at the bar that night.
I know I’m still a minor, but I look older and never had any trouble getting alcohol. I usually go to the bars with some of my friends, but tonight, I wanted to be alone. I’m not an alcoholic, but sometimes, scotch can make me feel great. So here I was, alone, drinking a twelve years old scotch. The bar I was in was downtown and pretty crowded.
I was at my second glass when I noticed a pretty women looking at me across the bar. She seemed quite older than me, perhaps in the end of her thirties or the beginning of her forties, but she was in better shape than most women half her age. It’s not like she was wrinkled or anything, she just seemed older. She kept staring at me, I wondered why. I smiled at her, and she smiled back.
She then started to walk towards me, moving her hips from left to right. She had green eyes and long red hair. She also had a small nose and luscious lips. She was also wearing a tight red dress, very short. I looked at her beautiful long legs as she walked towards me. Then I looked at her breasts. They were very big, it seemed that all they wanted was to pop right out of that sexy dress.
When she arrived close to me, she took a moment to look at me. I felt my heartbeat accelerate. There was something special about this woman. I couldn’t tell what. So I kept smiling, looking confident and all. She also kept smiling at me. There was something in her eyes. She looked like a women who wanted something and knew exactly what.
– Do you speak English?, she asked with a sultry voice
That was a good question, because most of the people who lived in my hometown spoke only French. I was lucky, I spoke French, English and a little bit of Spanish.
– Yes, I answered
– Good, I’m Pamela, Pamela Hayton, she said while sitting next to me
She then reached out her hand, I noticed she was wearing a couple of rings, all of them adorned with huge diamonds.
– And I’m Mark, Mark Lupin, a pleasure to meet you, I said as I shook her hand
– The pleasure’s all mine Mark. I just bought a house a couple of miles out of town, and I felt so lonely… I needed someone to talk with.
– You’re in luck, I said, I’d love to speak with you
Pamela started laughing quietly
– I hope you’re ready to do more than just talk, perhaps later in the night…
I felt her hand reaching down onto my thigh, I was quite surprised by the recent events.
– Well, I said, let’s see where this night leads us…
It was the first time a women was flirting this hard with me, I didn’t really know what to say.
– Let me offer you a drink first, I offered
– That would be lovely Mark, I would love some of your scotch
I then waved at the barman, letting him know I wanted another drink. A few moments later, he came with the drink I had ordered.
– So Pamela, what do you do for a living?
– Nothing! Isn’t that wonderful? I inherited quite a fortune from my parents, this means I can spend all of my days doing nothing and enjoying life…
– You’re a lucky women Pamela
– Who knows Mark, she said as she moved her hand closer to my crotch, you too could become lucky.
Then she winked at me. All of this had started to make me a little hard, not fully erect though. We continued talking, and drinking for quite some time.
– I must say Mark, you’re pretty bold. You enter this bar and order some drinks even though you’re obviously still a minor. How old are you, 17, 16?
– 16, I answered, not too loudly though, I didn’t want anyone else to hear it
– You know, as a responsible adult, it would be my duty to tell on you… but don’t worry, I won’t.
I laughed a little
– Thank you Pamela
– Still, I have the feeling I need a little compensation, for being so nice with you…
– What do you want?
She seemed to think for a moment.
– I want to have fun, she said, I want you to come home with me. And because I feel you still owe me, you will do everything I ask, for tonight at least.
– All right, I said.
I felt a little amused by the situation, and a little aroused…
– All right, now let me give you a taste of what’s to come…
She then grabbed me by my shirt and kissed me passionately. Wrapping her tongue around mine and then forcing it down my throat.
– Not bad Mark, not bad at all. Now come with me, I have a limo waiting for us outside.
We then left the bar, I felt a little stunned by what had just happened. There was a big limousine waiting for us in front of the bar. The driver came out and opened the back door for us. The driver was a pretty blond girl who must have been in her early twenties. When I passed before her, she smiled at me.
There was Champaign in the Limo. Pamela served it for me. When we got out of town, we rode for about half an hour. During the ride, Pamela kept caressing my legs… and my crotch. By then my cock had started to be kind of hard. When Pamela felt it, she started caressing that area of my pants a little. Stroking it gently.
– Oooh, she said, it seems you are packing something quite big. I can’t wait to see it out in the open, but we’ll have to wait for that.
Finally, we arrived at our destination. Pamela wasn’t living in a house, she was living in a mansion. It was huge and looked like a castle more than anything else. When we entered her huge hall, two very pretty girls were waiting for us in French maid outfits. One of was blond the other one was a brunette. It seemed like Pamela enjoyed pretty women, I couldn’t believe my eyes.
– Mark, there is something I must tell you… I have a husband, a good for nothing idiot whom I don’t like. I married him a long time ago, even then I didn’t love him. We had a child seventeen years ago, my daughter, Holly, that’s why I married him, the biggest mistake of my life. I like our daughter very much, and I’m sure you’ll like her… But you don’t have to worry about my husband, he wouldn’t have to see me bring another man home if he was any good in bed…
I didn’t know what to say… Honestly, I was too attracted by Pamela to care
– No problem, I said
Pamela than smiled lustfully
– Good, and remember you have to do everything I ask
– Don’t worry Pamela, I remember
– Great, then get undressed
I was surprised by her request. I didn’t move.
– Here? , I asked
– Yes, she laughed, I want you to get undressed here
I don’t know if it was the scotch, or Pamela, but I started unbuttoning my shirt.
– Girls, help him, Pamela ordered.
The two maids then got around me. One of them started taking my shoes and my socks of while the other was pulling my pants down. In only a few moments, I was completely naked, my penis was hanging between my legs.
– I’m impressed Mark, I really love your cock. And you’re pretty muscular too…
As I said, I was pretty good looking. I had a little hair on my chest, not too much. Pamela started caressing me.
– You’re a man, she said, Just how I like them.
Then, Pamela lowered her hand, slowly getting close to my cock. She then grabbed it with one hand, and held it for a second.
– Girls, she said once again, I want to see him fully erect, just don’t make him cum yet.
The two girls smiled at each other and took off the top of their outfits. They were completely naked except for their gloves, shoes, socks and of course, their strings. The blond started kissing me and playing with my hair, while the other one, the brunette, got down on her knees and started playing with my dick. She began stroking it faster and faster, then she started licking it, wrapping her tongue around the tip of my cock.
The blond one stopped kissing me, and went down on her knees also. The two maids started licking my dick, each of them took their side. The brunette then started playing with my balls, and after a moment, started sucking on them. The blond then started sucking on the tip of my penis. After a few moments, she grabbed the shaft of my dick and started sucking on it. She couldn’t fit all of my penis in her mouth, but it felt great.
I was now completely hard. My penis was pretty large and measured a little bit more than 7.5 inches long. The brunette got up and gently pushed the blond maid aside, she then started to stroke my cock with both her hands. I glanced quickly at Pamela, I could see she was licking her lips. She stepped closer to me.
– This will be enough girls… for now.
The two maids stood up and kissed each other. They were holding themselves by the hips as they were staring at me. Pamela looked at my dick.
– My my, she said, your dick is perfect
– It also tastes great, said the brunette maid, isn’t that right Tiffany?
– It is, Bethany, answered the other maid
I heard steps coming from the stairs behind me. As I turned around, I saw a very pretty and young girl looking at me. She looked a lot like Pamela, they had the same red hair and green eyes. The only difference with the girl in front of me was that she looked younger and had smaller breasts. I presumed it was Holly, Pamela’s daughter. She was a beauty, wearing a tight black dress. I felt a little shy being naked and hard, but Holly had a lusty smile on her face.
– This is your new plaything mother? I see why you’re interested in him, she said
She paused for a moment, looking at me.
– I hope you’ll be willing to share him, perhaps when you’re done having your fun.
She continued to walk, when she arrived next to me, she gave me a kiss on the cheek and whispered to me:
– We’ll have a lot of fun tonight…
I looked at her as she exited to another room. Pamela was still looking at me.
– Girls, she said, I want you to take him to the bathroom, although Mr Lupin smells very nice, I want you to wash him completely. In the meantime, I’ll prepare my husband for what’s to come…
I wondered what was to come. I was surprised to learn her husband was here. What did she have in mind? My dick was too hard for me to think straight, but I decided whatever Pamela had in reserve for me, it could only be fun. As the maids led me to one of the bathrooms of the mansion, we passed a couple of other maids. All of them were young, very pretty, wearing a French maid outfit and smiled at me while staring at my cock.
Two even stopped us and took a moment to stroke my dick. I felt great, not having the attention of women could be very hard for the ego, but this night, tons of women wanted to sleep with me. It was the best night of my life so far. We then arrived at the bathroom. It was huge and made of dark marble. Five people at least could fit in the shower. The maids, Tiffany and Bethany were still naked. Tiffany, the blond one grabbed my dick and pulled me into the shower.
For almost half an hour, the girls poured soap on themselves and rubbed their perky breasts all over me. I was just standing there, hard as rock, looking at two beautiful naked girls rubbing themselves on me. It was the best shower of my life. They enjoyed cleaning my dick very much, I could tell. When they finished they rinsed me and dried my hair. When I asked if I could have some clothes, Bethany answered,
– Mrs Hayton has forbidden you to wear any clothes in this house. If she changes her mind, you can have your clothes back.
Honestly, I didn’t mind. It felt good to see all the women looking at me with lust. I didn’t care if I was a sexual object, it was fun. For the first time of my life, I felt truly desired. The maids then led me to another room. It was some sort of lounge or living room I figured. My family has a lot of money, and I live in a big house, but it was not as huge as Pamela’s mansion. When I entered the big room, I noticed five maids were waiting in the back. Pamela was there, sitting on a couch with another man.
I figured it was her husband. He was not that old, perhaps even a little younger than Pamela herself. His hair was blond and he had blue eyes. He was frailer than me, but just as tall. At this time, my dick had gotten softer, but it was still very long and hanging between my legs. When they saw me, Pamela and her husband stood up.
– There he is! said Pamela, That is what a real man looks like Nick.
Nick didn’t say anything. Pamela grabbed my hand and pulled me forward. I was feeling quite happy, to be put above another man like that, it was great for my ego.
– Look at his cock Nick, look at it. Isn’t it big?
Nick starred at me, not saying a thing. Pamela got down on her knees and grabbed my cock. She robbed it a few seconds and then kissed it, leaving the trace of her lipstick where she kissed.
– I just love that cock, she said, it’s so much bigger than yours. Even know when it’s soft it’s bigger than you when you’re erect. Now pull your pants down honey, I want you to see how much Mark is greater than you.
Nick didn’t seem to want to, he tried objecting
– Come on honey, it’s not…
– I said pull them down! she almost yelled
He didn’t argue anymore. He started unzipping his pants and he finally pulled them down. What he had between his legs must have been one of the smallest cocks I had ever seen. I don’t know if it reached two inches. I didn’t know whether to feel bad for the guy or to laugh. Some of the maids didn’t seem to have this problem, they started laughing at him, pretty loudly. Pamela grabbed both our dicks in her hand and pulled me and Nick very close. It was obvious my penis was a lot bigger.
– Come on, Nick said, it’s just too big. I mean, the guy isn’t real. He must have had an implant or something.
– Now now honey, said Pamela, Mr Lupin is just more of a man than you are.
Pamela was still on her knees and licked her lips for a moment as she looked at my dick. I was feeling so great, like I was on top of the world.
– Ladies, who would have sex with my husband, Mr Hayton here? asked Pamela
None of the maids raised their hands.
– And who would have sex with my friend, Mr Lupin here?
All of the maids raised their hands. Feeling that much wanted was new to me. I was filled with pride and confidence. Pamela turned to her husband.
– I’m sorry honey, but a girl like me needs to have some fun once in a while. For that, I need a man like Mark. You’re just… inadequate. And to be sure you won’t be having any of the fun tonight, I got this for you.
Pamela then grabbed something from her purse and attached it on Nick’s penis. Upon closer inspection, I could see it was chastity belt.
– What’s that? he asked
– Don’t you worry about that honey, sit down right there. You’ll have to watch Mark pounding me with his big hard cock. See how a true man does it. And when we’re done, he’ll probably fuck our daughter too. I’m now in charge here Nick, don’t you move from here. Understood?
– Yes honey…
Pamela smiled and turned to me.
– It’s time I gave you a little attention Mark…
She started caressing my cock with one hand, got up and kissed me. I was starting to get hard, Pamela then turned around and bent forward a little.
– Rub your dick on my ass, she ordered me, I want to feel it.
That is exactly what I did. Her dress was so soft, it made me even harder. She moaned loudly as I was
doing it. I imagined penetrating her in her wet pussy with my long hard dick. I think she was imagining that too. She turned around and stared at me.
– Get ready to have some fun, she said
She started to unzip her dress, I could hear it. When the zipper came to the bottom, she slowly slipped her dress off of her body, revealing her soft and pale skin. She was wearing nothing black lingerie and her high heels. She walked towards me, taking small steps and with each one, she was unclipping her bra a bit more. When she was only a few steps from me, she totally let go, revealing her big breasts to me.
– Now, the real fun can begin, she said…
To be continued…
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Hi everyone, this is my first story, feel free to give me some feedback. Part 2 will be coming soon if people enjoyed the first part.
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Caught masturbating a niece gives in to the forbidden temptation of her uncle
Review’s from Part 1 were super. Hopefully, this one is clearner than the last.
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I will warn you that I am not a very good writer, nor a very descriptive one. So read at your own risk. Also, the characters in this are older than they are when they appear in the show. However, not that much older (they’re not, like, thirty years in the future). And yeah, it’s an older season, but it is my favorite season, and May is (in my opinion) the hottest Pokemon Girl trainer on the show, so I made her the main point. No copyright infringement intended. I simply wanted to read a certain kind of story, I couldn’t find it, and so I wrote it. Again, it’s not good, but I think it’s fairly fappable.
A young girls reluctantly tries everything to adapt to new trends.
I am going to be blunt here I am dyslexic, my spelling is going to be ropey and my grammar just plain bad but as I only learnt to read at 14 I don’t really care. If you don’t want to read it don’t but if you do don’t tell me at the end to learn to spell. This was more about me writing something for myself than anyone else. Oh and if you read it and I have used the wrong word over and over let me know, I once handed in a project with practical instead of particle every time and it is always nice to know when I go wrong. Regards Rave
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The estate was all I knew, I was born there 12 years ago and I have never spent a night sleeping anywhere else. All I knew was these streets, my schools where all on the estate, most people here didn’t work, most people here never left. My mother had left when I was one, she hadn’t taken me with her, I couldn’t blame her all people here wanted to do was get out few ever did. My dad had stayed, had raised me the best he could and worked 12 hours a day in a dead end job for minimum wage just to keep me in cloths. He did his best but I wasn’t a good kid, no one on the estate was a good kid but I was worse, I don’t remember I time when I wasn’t in trouble.
The Dead Heads where my gang, I had been running with them for more than a year but it was only 3 weeks ago when I rolled the dice, took the beating and became a real member. I was still hurt from it but I didn’t care, it is the price we pay to join up. We ran down the street towards the park.
It was called a park but it was really a muddy bit of ground in the middle of the estate with a tree and a set of swings. The park was favourite battle ground in the current gang fighting on the estate. The Dead Heads where one of the 6 gangs on the estate, we where the smallest but we where hard. We arrived on the east corner are opposition the west, they where called The Hell Boys, they had jumped one of our lads last week and we were here going to settle that debt today. We had 47 lads here they had 58, we had both got about two dozen girls there to watch. The rules where simple, you beat down or drove off all of the other gang to win, I didn’t know what the prize was but it would have been arrange by the bosses beforehand.
The oldest strongest members took the middle of the gang around our boss, big bad Bob or B3 to us. I was closer to the flank on the left, I picked the lad I was going to aim for, and I ran my hand along the scare on my left bicep for luck. It was the first scare I ever got, I was 7 and had court it on the top of a chain link fences, it had bleed so much but since then it had been lucky. I had add many other to it over the year as a daredevil and a thug but it was my first. Most of us still wore our school uniform, as we didn’t have any other cloths, so to tell each gang apart we used face paint. Red spirals covered the right side of my face, the same as the others, these where our marks and I was proud to bear them. The Hell Boys had two black strips going from the corner of each eye to their chin. Their boss was giving some kind of speech, it had been going on for some time, so we waited.
As he finished Bob stepped forward, he wasn’t stupid but he was simple, he said only three words “TIME FOR WARR!!!”
“WARRRRR!!!” came the cry from all our throats and we charged.
The Hell Boys came to meet us. I felt the rush I had been waiting for as my adrenalin spiked the world seemed to slow as it hit my brain and my body moved with a will of its own. My vision began to blur and take on a red tinge, all fear and doubt left me and all I could fell we my rage and battle joy.
I shifted left to get the best angle on my target, he had seen me coming and corrected his own run to meet me. He had maybe a year and a half growth no me but I didn’t care, tonight I was unstoppable and he would fall to me. His first swing was sloppy on high and I took full advantage, I let it glance off my shoulder and moved in close. My right found his exposed rids again and again until I felt something crack and shift under the blow. I stepped back to as he sagged in pain, my upper arms would be a mass of bruise from his return blows but I had won. I move in for the kill driving him to his knees with an elbow to his skull and a second put him on his back. That cost me as I didn’t see the fist coming.
It was fast and hit hard, the pain bloomed in the centre of my face, my vision swam and it took all my will to keep my legs under me. I would not fall! I duck the next fist more by luck than skill. Then the blood from my nose touched my lips. I love the taste of blood it is the taste of violence and it has power, you can drink more than a pint of it before you are sick and your blood is different to the taste of other peoples I have never found out why but it is. The blood brought the world back into focus and I let my pain fill my rage and it felt like I could fly. He had a foot on me, was maybe 16 and looked strong but he was out her on the flanks not in the middle, so there had to be something wrong with him.
I jumped back away from his next swing to give me room more to breath. As he came after me it was plain to see why he was out here fighting me, he held all his weight on his left leg having to almost drag his right along. I danced to his right forcing him to try and spin on his weak leg, I picked my shots, I was too young to really hurt him like this but I could make him mad. In frustration he moved to fast exposing his left leg with all his weight on it, I didn’t need a second chances. I jumped and slammed both of my feet into the inside of his knee cap. If it didn’t work I would be on the floor with an anger lad above me, it had to work. The knee is quite good at taking downward force but not sideways, his knee with all his weight on its top and all my weight on its side broke, it folded up underneath him in the wrong direction. The is nothing quite like the sound breaking of a human hinge joint, it is somewhere in the middle of ripping paper, broken celery and snapping twigs, but I didn’t hear any of those sounds all I heard was the animal like howl of agony coming from his mouth. It seemed to go on forever drawing looks for half the people there but slowly it became little more than a whimper.
I forced my legs back under me and pushed myself to my feet and let out my own roar of hate, rage and pain and their right flank fled from us. Some of us set of after them, other where already down, I was one of four that turned and headed towards the centre.
The brawl there was breaking up, Hell Boys where moving back most just trying to keep away from Big Bad Bob he was 6’6 and built like a house no one could stand in his way. Then I saw the knife, this was back in the day when Chavs where still Scallis around our way before everyone carried one, it wasn’t that they where to hardcore it was that a knife was weak, only people that couldn’t hag needed a knife. No one was at bob’s back, his cousin fast Eddy was supposed to be there but he was a coward and had feel behind as soon as he thought no one would see.
I am told that I howled like a wolf, that I ran across the park knocking 4 lads out the way and I jumped smashing both my knees into the knife carrier’s chest before he could close with bob as he went down he cut my right forehand and I beat him into unconsciousness and I had been laughing. All I remember was a rush of red, a crash of bodies and a dull pain in my right arm. The world came back to me as a rush of noise, it was the first time I ever lost complete control and it felt good I was going to have to work on it.
“Good lad Rave” I looked up at Bob and then down at the mess I had made of the lad underneath me. He was still breathing but he looked like he didn’t want to be. The Hell Boys have scattered there was just us. Who the hell was Rave? It took me a second to come to me, I was Rave, well my name was Greg but I had gone by Rave for as long as I could remember. I don’t know who gave it to me but that was my name. I looked back up a Bob.
“Aye its alreet Boss” I smiled back. We had won.
My body was a mess I was covered in bruises, both my knuckles where cut, I had a six inch gash to my right forearm and even with the bitter taste in the back of my month I was still shaking from the adrenalin.
I could hear the sirens of the ambulances at the park in the background as I push my way into the old YMCA. Unless some die the police wouldn’t care about the fight, it was just estate kids after all.
The YMCA had left the estate more than 10 years ago and their building had become the Dead Heads base, it still had water and power but I don’t know how. The ground floor had a small front hall, a massive common room the now had couches around the edge and mattresses laid in the middle of the floor, a big dining room that still had two long tables in it and a kitchen that was really more of a bar now. Most of the lads that could still walk had made it back here and now lay around the common room. Girls moved between them patching up the wounded and flirting with the others. I move towards them as I needed someone to deal with my arm. People started to notice me, those that hadn’t seen me in the fight where now being told by others in the room, a few came forward to congratulate me but most kept back. To draw attention to me was to comment the fast Eddy has not kept his place and he may have been a coward but he was a vicious pick and held power as Bob’s kin.
I was stopped before I could get my arm see too. The lad went by Cain and was known as Bob’s left hand.
“You have been asked for when you came in” said Cain “upstairs now.”
I didn’t argue just followed. Upstairs was special if you weren’t part of the inner circle you didn’t go up without an invited. The where six dormitories each used to fit four bunk beds but things where moved in and out of them now you heard rumours about what went on in them at the new moon parties and just how bad things could get if you came up here for punishment. The was a small office and a large shower room at the end of the hall, this had become the bosses “throne” room and was where I was heading.
The room was all white tiles, the where still shower heads, sinks and toilets around the walls but chairs, tables, floor cushions and even a bed where also around. I had expected the room to be full of the gangs best and there girls but the where only four people in there. Bob stood with a group of elite thugs Lacy, Bob’s right hand, was an animal who spent half his time fighting people that made fun of his name, Taz a soft spoken lad who was known for going mad in fights and Mark who we all knew was next in line if Bob quite, died or got nicked. Cain closed the door and stood with his back against it, I was trapped in a room with my gangs 5 heavy hitter, and I hoped like hell I wasn’t going to catch a beating.
“You did well today and more importantly saw you do well” said Mark.
I thought of bragging, of acting hard but that wouldn’t be right, not here, not now.
“I didn’t try to do it and I don’t remember it. All I have got is bits and well…um…”
“Redness” Cain finished behind me.
“How do you know what I saw?”
“We all know because it happens to us. It is rear for someone to lose themselves to the red mist but it happens. When we see it we look after it as it can drown a boy” explained Taz “we will teach you how to enjoy it, use it and most importantly control it. That is if you want us to?” I gave a vague nod.
Bob smiled at that “Good now let’s get someone to fix that arm.”
With that Cain left to get the other the was fast Eddy and two of his cronies and the Daves three lads called Dave that worked as muscle for the gang and where treated like one person, the rest where girls all were pretty, most were blond and some were naked. They fawned over the lad that had been hurt, some looked in my direction and whispered about who I was. The two girls that had sat nearest Bob stood and walked over to me. One of them was Bob current girl, it was always a short live position and held no real power, and she would go back to being another lad’s sooner or later. The other was a different matter she was the most powerful girl in the gang.
She went by Bex and she was Bob’s little sister and Eddy fantasy, he would have raped her by now if Bob wouldn’t have killed him because Bob loved his sister. She was two at 16 two year younger than Bob and the same age as Eddy She wasn’t the prettiest girl there by a long way but she was close to the sexiest, her chest was small but well formed and she had a real six-pack for a stomach that led almost perfectly into her hips. She kept her hair short and spiked, it was currently pink but that could change from day to day. The fact that she could take me in a fight was also more of a turn on than I would admit publicly.
“Come on you we are going to patch you up” order Bex
They took me to one of the dorms the room had what looked like a hospital bed in on corner with restraint stapes on it, the other wall had enough medical stuff to put a body back together or given the restraints on the bed take one apart, in the centre of the room was a metal chair bolted to the floor the was a set of handcuff attached to each side of the chair. Bex told me to take off my shirt so I wouldn’t get blood on it when she relined my nose. She looked at my body with something that I had never really seen before I now know it was lust. I have a slim frame but with my life it hadn’t stayed that way for long, I may have still been little more than a boy but my body was hard muscle and she liked it. She used both her thumbs to snap my nose back into place and the blood flowed down my chest while the other girl patched my knuckles. She pushed me down onto the chair the other girl gave her a needle and thread. I felt the prick and the tug as she sowed up my arm.
“I saw you safe me brother” she said like she was talking to a small child
“People keep telling me that”
“I think you where very brave”
“People keep telling me that too”
“And I think you should get a reward” She moved up and kissed my hard. I knew the cuff was in place before she clipped it shut. She to look at me, I held eye contact as I move my other wrist down to the second cuff and let her fasten it.
“Very few of my play things get into my chair so willingly Rave, do you know what I will do to you?” she asked
“I have heard rumours, I think this is the only way to find out what is true, and it could even be fun” I said.
She had a bowl full of dirty water that she used to wipe the blood and paint off my face
“Now let have a look at you” she grabbed me beneath chin and pulled me head this was and that “you not that ugly are you?”
I kept my mouth shut trying to keep eye contact when I could, trying to show no fear. She grabbed for my pants but was going too quickly, it took her three attempts to pull them down leaving them in a pile at my feet. My steadily stiffing cock jumped free. I had hit puberty you had too before you could roll the dice to join up and was much bigger than most other lads of my age but I still knew it would get bigger and I was still on the small side. If Bex had a problem with size she didn’t say, she bit her lower lip and let out a hum at the sight of it.
“You can leave now Kate” she said to the other girl
“I can’t Bob told me to stay and watch”
“My brother said what” Bex turned on the girl who panicked and started babbling so she slapped her “Why in hell does my brother want you to watch me fuck him” so she was going to fuck me.
“He said the lad was dangerous and you shouldn’t be left to play with him alone” Kate said. Bex turned on my and grabbed me by the throat.
“Your hurt, naked, chain to a chair and I am choking the life out of you. Tell me are you dangerous boy” she snarled
“Very” I smiled back, she let go, holding her hand as if I had bit her “but if I hurt you it would end the fun wouldn’t it! Now what is this I hear about you fucking me?”
“See I am safe” Bex laughed but she made no move to send Kate away again.
She started with a deep passionate kiss, she sucked slightly drawing my tong into her mouth her own moved like lighting, I tried to do the same with my own but lack the skill and experiences to do it very well but Bex’s own more than made up for it. As she broke off the kissed she bit my lower lip hard, for a second I thought she had broke the skin. She started to lick my neck sending shivers down my back, it wasn’t something that I had seen as erotic before but I couldn’t stop myself moaning. Then she started biting me, small nips on my ears neck and along my collar bone. Then she moved on to my nipples using her teeth and tong to force more moans out of me.
She stopped and stood up, I pulled against the cuffs as I tried to follow frustrated at the loss of her mouth. She laughed and slipped her top over her head. Her breast where small but well formed and stood out in neat contrast to the muscles of her upper body and abdomen. I have always found something very sexy about a girl in just her pants and I think this is where it started. Her nipples where tiny in compression to her breast and I wanted to suck them.
She lit a cigarette as she moved back towards me. This time she kissed me she blow smoke into my lunges, it made me gag which she liked so did it again. After about the four kiss I had got used to it so she went back to my nipples, I was having fun but she was just trying to make them more sensitive. She took another drag on the cigarette and drove the red hot end into my flesh just about my right nipple. It was agony but I would not cry out not in front of her. I looked up at her and smiled bearing my teeth. She did it again but this time I was expecting it the pain only adds to my arousal, this time a moaned with the pain. She moaned in response turned on by my masochism.
She slapped me and stood, slipping her pants and knickers down. Her pubic hair had been dyed the same shade of pink as her head. She began to masturbate franticly looking at my now painful erect cock.
“I hope you last cos I need to get off now” She said.
She straggled me using her hand to line up my cock and then sat down. She engulfed my cock in her hot dripping cunt in one go and began to ride me. It took all my will not to cum straight away, I had to focus on anything but for the beautiful girl fucking me and the pleasure I was getting. I watch the half smoked cigarette snipping across the room, Kate looking scarred by the door, the single bead of sweat running down between Bex’s breast and between her muscles of her six pack and towards her… NO! That was not helping. She grabbed my hair and pulled my head back. I let my eyes closes and thought none sexual thoughts.
I could feel her getting close, her breath coming in shape gasps. She was close but I was closer, I would not cum first. I yanked my head free losing some hair in the process. My mouth was level with her breast so I attacked them, licking and kissing, and then I found one of those small nipples and began to suck making her scream with pleasure. I was still losing it so I decided to take a page out of her play book and nipped her sensitive nipple with my teeth.
That pushed her over the edge and she took me with her. Her body tensed up and she howl with delight, her cunt contracted around my cock that pushed me over. It was the most intense orgasm of me young life as I sent spurt after spurt deep inside her. A smile of joy was on her lips as she came down, she put both arms around my neck and panted as I went soft inside her. She stood and I slipped out of her letting both mine and her cum run down the inside of her leg. She undid the left cuff and I made my move as she moved to the next. My right hand came free in a blare of moment, I had been picking the cuff with the needle used to stitch my arm I rapped my hand around her throat and tangle my legs with her as I stood, and she went over backwards with me on top of her. Kate took an intake of breath to cry for help. She stopped when I kissed Bex, deeper and harder with my body free.
“I told you I was dangerous” I said as we parted and I got off her
She lay there not panting as I got dressed above her. I slipped back down to her and kissed her lightly on the forehead.
“Still it was fun, maybe we could smoke another cigarette sometime soon” Her eye lit up at that, I don’t think she got many boys wanting to play twice I walked to the door and turned.
“I will see you soon Mistress” her body gave an involuntary shudder of pleasure when I said that word.
I Nodded to Cain on my way down stairs, things where looking up.
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Humiliation confessions
On a Friday night I was called to a Mistress that I just had met on the net. She received me totally naked and ordered me to strip. Then she lay down and told me to shoot my cum over her when she was on her back on the narrow bed. Her hands were behind her neck I could enjoy her beautiful figure with the full tits raised in the way always making me so horny. As I was going to Mistress Iona the next Saturday morning I had saved my cum the whole week to be sure to come to her with a strong erection and full balls so I knew that I should face big problems if I was unloading now but what to do ….. As a good slave I had to obey any order and so I started to work my penis that already was throbbing of delight by looking at this sexy woman. She looked me straight in the eyes and I could see the lust in her when she could see how my own horniness built up and I worked harder and harder until I came with an enormous load of cum all over her face, breasts, stomach, pussy and thighs. “Get on your knees and lick it all up!” She said. Immediately I was down on my all four and started the licking up on her face. It was such a nice intimacy to lick her on the eyes, the nose and on her lips where I had to go deep to get all cum off her soft lips. I got aroused again so I felt my cock stiffen and drip some precum. She was totally still and did not show anything of her horniness. Licking the breasts was a feast as well as all the way down to the pussy. As she was shaved I had a fantastic contact with her whole pussy and she did not protest when I went unnecessarily deep into her cunt and even spread her legs wide for me to be able to reach her whole pussy.
When I had finished she just turned around and said: “Now shot on my back!” I stood up and worked my cock again and soon I did a quite big shooting all over her shoulders, waist and ass where I looked after to get a lot of the cum flowing down between her buttocks. Then, as I expected, she told me to lick her clean. Down on my knees again and starting with her shoulders and then the waist and then…. the buttocks and between… She parted her legs wide open so I could get the last drops from her asshole and the cunt.
During the whole seance I had not seen any reaction in her but now it came: “Slave, stand up and put your cock in my mouth!”. Surprised I stood up and she, sitting on the bed, took the whole little thing in her mouth and started sucking it. She was a formidable cocksucker and it didn’t take too long before my hard on filled her mouth completely and soon I had to shoot my load deep into her throat…. Afterwards she only ordered me to dress and go.
The next morning I came to Mistress Iona and she noticed immediately that my erection was not up to standard so she said that I needed some fresh air to get into shape. I feared the worst and surely enough….. She put me in the car naked as I was and drove me to a park that has a lot of trees and bushes but also has a lot of visitors on a Saturday morning like this with good weather. “I pick you up at six o’clock” she said and left me. I was creeping into a bush and from there I advanced from bush to bush down to a less frequented area of the park to spend the next nine hours…. The worst thing was all the dogs who came and showed too much interest in my ass and cock which was easily available to them as Iona had ordered me to be on my all four for the whole day. What could I do when they sniffed and licked my ass and the balls and even the cock that I couldn’t help getting hard and producing some precum that they loved to lick up…..
Other intruders were young lovers who liked this secluded part of the park for enjoying themselves and each other. One couple came in the late afternoon when I had planned to move back to the meeting point with Iona. They were just besides the bush where I was pressing myself down in the grass not to be seen of them. After three big orgasms, that I could hear but not see, they slowly dressed and smoked before they left. I knew that I was late now and rushed as fast as I could, as I still had to hide myself. When I arrived at the meeting point my cock was only half-erect and I was half-hour late. Iona just looked furiously at me and said: “You bastard, coming too late and not fully erect!!. Now you have to stay here tonight, I will pick you up tomorrow morning at eight o’clock sharp”. With these words she left me again naked in the park.
I sneaked back deep into the park and was hiding until 8 o’clock in the evening when I managed to sneak into the gent’s toilet. I was creeping up into one corner of a cubicle and was so happy when I heard the warden lock the door from the outside. Pooh, at least indoors tonight with a possibility to sleep on the floor. I thought but… soon I heard voices outside and in came two guys who had managed to open the door. They seemed to be quite rough types what I could hear from their way of talking so I decided to sneak out as soon as they seemed to be settled in. However, the guys started to undress and teasing each other and I had to listen to a male 69 that should have been an interesting show under other circumstances. Finally they came and told each other which a fantastic fuck it had been. Just then I took the opportunity to rush towards the door to get out but…… they had locked the door again.
One of the big fellows, very tall and hairy, walked up to me and said: “Hey, little creep stay with us and have some fun”. He grabbed my dick and put a finger up in my ass. As a genuine sub this humiliation made me very horny which he could feel in my cock. “Good that you are horny so you will enjoy me fucking you”. Saying this he put me on my all four and rammed his big cock straight into me and started to fuck hard. This was the first time I was fucked by a man but besides the pain I was nearly ashamed by starting to like it. Just when he was to burst he withdraws his cock and sprayed his big load over my back and ass. “You like it you little creep”; he said and smeared his cum into my ass, balls and cock.
Now the other guy ordered me to fuck him and went down on hands and knees and put his hairy ass up in my face. The first guy at the same time said: “I am sure you little sub creep would like to be whipped as well so I will help you with your fucking”. Saying this he took the belt out of his jeans and told me to mount the other guy. Feeling the cum smeared into my bottom and awaiting the whipping gave me an extraordinary hard on. This was good because the asshole I was fucking was quite small. The hard whipping helped me to penetrate the ass and after 20-30 lashes I was shooting inside the guy. “Now we need to sleep a little but tomorrow we will enjoy this little slave again. You sleep there “, he said and showed me a corner. “Of course, this corner also happens to be our toilet”. With these words he started to pee all over me making me very wet as well as the floor I was to sleep on. The other guy ordered me to lie on my back whereafter he also urinated all over my head and body, not at least on my genitals.
There was a clock on the wall and it approached 8 before the warden unlocked the door. It was the time I should meet Iona… With the two guys still sleeping I rushed out and towards the meeting point. Luckily enough there were only some joggers out at this time in the morning and they didn’t care too much about me. Probably thinking I was part of a streaking group of students. 10 minutes late I arrived to Iona’s car with less than a half erect penis. I fell on my knees and kissed her toes to apologise but she only said: “Late again and no erection!. You show no respect for your Mistress and will be punished the whole day, you worthless slave! And you are smelling of urine and cum and I see whip-marks on your ass. Looks like you had a very good time”. She opened the door and let me in as the wet dog I were. At her house she just let me out to be on all four in her garden. After a while she opened the door and whistled for me to come. As fast as possible on all four I reached the door just as she slammed it close. Outside the door were two bowls, one with water and one with some food. Hungry as I was I ate it before her dogs should get the smell of it.
Soon Jack came out naked. Jack is one of Iona’s lovers, very tall and strong with some sadistic instincts. He put a collar around my neck and a leash on it. Then he took me to a place outside Iona’s bedroom, which has full size windows along the whole wall to the garden so you can see everything going on inside. He tied me with a very short leash at a tree forcing me to look into the windows. He then me a big pee all over me and even grabbed my hair and turned up my face so he could pee into my mouth.
The rest of the morning I had to watch how he and Iona made love in all thinkable ways, probably enjoying knowing that my hungry and horny eyes followed every detail of what they were doing. At lunchtime he came out and ordered me to lick his cock clean of his own cum mixed with Iona’s juices. He carried a leather-whip in his hand and told me that Iona asked him to give me 25 lashes because of my bad behaviour. Jack is so strong and he enjoys so much to inflict pain on other people so I really got it. Worst was when he ordered me to part my legs so the end of the whip hit my balls and sometimes even my poor dick.
In the afternoon Jack came out with the biggest erection and walked up to me telling me to get down with my face towards the ground and my ass up so it should be easier for him to penetrate me. Fucked again by a man… He did it very hard and again, after getting used to the pain, I must admit that I loved it and was disappointed when he took out his cock and blew the load over my ass and back. He then whistled for the big dog to come and lick it all up which it did with big intensity. When it licked my balls and the shaft of my cock I couldn’t help but getting a big hard on. When Jack saw this he lay down besides me on his back and ordered me to fuck his ass and at the same time jerk his cock. When I saw Iona naked in the window and playing with her tits and pussy I got a real horny kick and did a fantastic fucking of Jack’s ass and he and I came at the same time. Afterwards he told me to lick him clean and then I got 12 farewell lashes with the whip before I was led to the gate and let out on the street to my car as a dog on all four, smelly and dirty after the most humiliating weekend in my life…….
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the inflential prisoner turns his attentions to the judge and his new wife
When i entered the dim lit hotel room Ricky was there waitng for me. He told me to wear the long black jacket he gave me with nothing under and thats what i did.. I greeted him with a wet kiss on the lips and sat on his lap..
I asked him what all this was about. His reply was that it was our last night together and that we needed to do something special, something that would forever connect us..
I always knew he was crazy but this, seamed real strange.. I looked around the room and I spotted a goblet and a knife on the table.. I started to panic and he must have noticed because he began to massage my back and told me to relax..
I asked what was the knife for, have patience was all he said.. He began licking and bitting on my neck despite the knife i started to relax. When he unbottoned my jacket and pulled it off of me he told me how good i was to him and said he loved me so much that he needed to have a part of me always with him..
A part of me!?
He got up and went to the table and filled the Goblet with wine, then he diped the knife in it an swirled it around…
He handed me the goblet and told me to have a drink.. I took the cup, but before drinking it i said, are you going to kill me?
Siren are you crazy? I could never do such a thing… I thought you trusted me.
I do Ricky its just all this seams strange.
Isnt everything we do a little strange Siren?
He had a point… With a prayer i took a gulp of the wine and whatever else was in it..
I handed the goblet back to him and he drank some and handed it back.. We continued to share the wine until it was finished.. I knew i had been druged but none of that mattered.. My body was tingling all over and I felt so strange.. Sitting there naked i became aware of my body and i couldnt help but touch myself..
I spread my long legs wide apart and began to stroke my clit.. Rickys arousal peeked from the opening in his robe, i told him to take the offensive material off so i could get a look at his body.. When he did he began to fist his cock in a slow jerking motion.. Rubbing my clit while he fucked himself was so fucking hot!
I got up and walked my naked ass over to him and his huge dick and pushed him onto the chair, i straddled his legs and began to slide down his huge pink mushroom tipped dick. Then he graped both my ass cheeks and thrusted me down onto his shaft so that he was deep inside of me and i was sitting directly on his lap.. When i began to move to ride him he stopped me..
Siren i need you to do this for me..
Do what? I asked.
He took the knife into his hand and said
I want to drink your blood and i want you to drink mine!
The idea should have sicken me but frankly it got me so hot i almost came right then and there..
I take that as a yes! Ricky said..
I nodded my head, then he lifted his wrist and cut across his vein. The crimson liquid trickled down his wrist and i immediately grabbed and began to lick it up all the way to the opened wound, when the blood hit my tounge i came so fucking hard I shook and my eyes rolled to the back of my head! Besides from Brandis pussy juices this was the best thing ive ever drank! I was so enthralled i didnt even feel him cut into my wrist..
My body was so turned up that when i began to ride his rock hard cock, it was at my bodys own accord.. After a few minutes Ricky pulled his wrist away from me and kissed me our bloods mixed in our mouths wich sent another shock wave through my body and my pussy mucles contracted sending Ricky over the edge… He pumped his hot load into my wanting pussy.. Squirt after delicious squirt shot through me, i continued to milk his dick for all its worth..
When he finished he pulled two neosporin bandaids out of his robe pockets and placed them over our cuts.. We both licked at the crimson lines that had trickled down each others wrist.
Amazingly Ricky was still hard and deep inside of me. He picked me up still burried inside of me and took me over to the bed. Before safely putting me down he lost his balance and we collapsed onto the bed, making his dick push further inside me to the point that it seamed like he would be stuck inside of me for all time…
We laughed for a moment, then i told him that i wanted to be on top..
I positioned myself on top of him ass hole first, this excited him. Since the first time Ricky butt raped me months ago we handt had anal sex since. My ass was so tight that i had to wiggle to even get the tip in… Each inch was excrutiating pain. Ricky had his hand on my ass and was doing his best to help push me down. When i finally reached the base of his dick i let out a scream.
I began to bouce my tight ass up and down is cock, the feeling was amazing to me. I could feel my ass stretching and tearing, and each time i slammed down on his dick it felt like i was going to shit. He pulled me closer to him so that he could wrap his hands around my neck and choke me.. A habit he had any time i was in control, so that he could put me in my place.. I could barley breathe but that didnt stop my bouncing…
He began to shout out dirty things things that turned me on..
“You nasty little slut you like getting your shit pushed in dont you?”
“Thats right fuck my dick nasty bitch, you belong to me, your ass is my sanctuary”
Then he turned me over on my back, positioning his legs on either side of my hips and pushing my knees into my chest so that he could have easy access to both holes..
When he shoved his cock into my pussy i moaned aloud, and he said ” ooh your such a dirty bitch.. you like that i shoved my dick into your pussy right after i fucked your dirty little ass dont you?”
Mmmhmm is all i could get out before he began choking me again… He began to pound at my pussy, making me lose the little bit of breath i had.. I decided to make things a little more interesting by fighting him scratching at him like he was hurting me, like i wanted him to stop… This made his assult on my pussy even more furious, and he began to pull back far and ram into me over and over again, it amazed me how great it felt to be brutally fucked..
He missed a beat and sent his fat mushroom tipped cock into my ass, it was a pleseant surprise for both of us.. He pounded my ass for a while before returning it back to my cunt. Then he found a steady rhythm that alternated from pussy to ass… I started to think how dirty i was to let him do this to me, but that thought just turned me on even more. I was making squealing noises enjoying the nasty pounding i was getting.. I was so turned up and i knew my orgasm was going to come real soon..
I could feel his dick was getting much stiffer and i knew it was only a matter of minutes maybe even seconds.. He rammed my pussy hole long and hard once more sending shock waves through my body and as soon as he pulled out and rammed my ass full force my orgasim over took me and i began to squirt my pussy juices onto Rickys muscular body.
The sight of it sent him over the edge, and just as he shot his hot cum into my ass he pulled out and squirted some on my pussy, belly and face.. Leaving me covered with his sweet necter…
He fell ontop of me and began to kiss and lick at my face, tasting his own jizz… I whispered to him “dont be greedy” and with that he went down on me and slurped at our combined sex juices and then shared them with me..
I was beat litteraly, but he had one more thing in mind… He sat me up in the bed and then pissed in my hair when i moved to protest it shot in my face and he matched it with a hard slap. Then he told me to suck his dick clean… I began sucking him with a greedy intent the combination of his cum piss as well as my own juice was pleaseant on the tounge….
When he was satisfied he layed down and pulled me close and began running his fingers through my soaking wet pissy hair until he drifted to sleep..
My last thought was wishing that Brandi was there to experience this amazing night with me………………………………………………………………………….
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A Mom take s a morning walk but meets trouble.
She was a lawyer, now she’s my whore
After picking your the perfect swim suite for my daughter, My buddies and helped her out if it.
Spun out & Letting Her Get Screwed
Let me in Izzy! I gotta get dressed!” Damn, the bitch locked the door. One day she was going to have to accept that this was my room too.
“One minute!” She shouted, sounding out of breath.
I wondered what she was doing. “Open the damn door!” No response from her again.
“Fine. You wanna be a bitch then I’ll just let myself in.” I muttered to myself as I walked to the kitchen for a butter knife, the only thing that can force the door open without breaking it. I went back to the bedroom door and stuck the knife in between the door and wall, prying it open.
The door gently swung inward to reveal Izzy on her hands and knees, naked with her fingers stuffed in her little pussy and ass. She was squirting with her face biting into the pillows so I wouldn’t hear her moans. My mouth dropped.
“Izzy what the fuck are you doing?!” The words just slipped out before I could stop them. She scrambled for her blanket, covering herself. I couldn’t move. I was in shock.
“Get out!!” She screamed, her face beat red. With only a little hesitation I grabbed the door knob and slammed it shut. I leaned against the door.
What the fuck did I just see. I thought. I replayed the scene in my head. My dick twitched each time I watched her squirt in my mind. I was hard the moment I witnessed it. I had been fantasizing about my baby sister for a little over a year now. Ever since she hit sixteen and those full plump C cup tits grew in and that firm thick ass developed, but I never knew she could do that. I’ve had plenty of chicks that squirted but never like that. Her pussy gushed like a waterfall and it was so fucking hot.
My cock throbbed painfully in my boxers, poking out. I couldn’t let her see this. She couldn’t know that it turned me on. She’d hate me! She’d be disgusted!
I had to settle my boy down before she came out, so I went to the living room, sat on the couch, and focused my mind on everything but that little scene I just witnessed. Only a few minutes went by before I heard her exit the room and enter the bathroom. Cautiously I crept into the room, changed into a black T, some blue jeans and my shoes. I grabbed my keys and wallet and exited the room closing the door. I heard the shower water running and I instantly began thinking about that wet pussy. I wanted to open the bathroom door, yank her out of the shower, pin her to the bathroom tile, and take her virginity. Ramming my ten inch thick cock deep, regardless if it hurt her.
I snapped myself out of that day dream before I could get stiff again, practically sprinting out the front door and hopping in my jeep. Before I knew it, I was on my way to Mike’s house.
Mike was originally supposed to come here but after what I just saw I needed to tell someone and it wasn’t going to wait. I usually figured my problems out on my own but how would I ever be able to speak to my sister again without those images in my head. It was easy when I didn’t have a clue what was under her clothes. Now it was going to be unbearable. I never told anyone how much of a freak I am. I assumed everyone would flip if they found out I had the hots for my sister so I kept it secret. It was difficult. Every guy that looked at her made me want to scream and tell them that she was mine and only mine, and if they were to even peak at her again, I’d smash their face. But I couldn’t and that frustrated me. Frustrated me so much that I took it out on her by treating her like shit. I hated her for making me feel this way. I called her names, put her down, and kept anything with a dick far, far away from her. She was isolated, depressed, and obviously in need of some loving. God I was such an asshole. If only I knew how she would have felt if she knew I wanted her. If only I could have told her the truth.
I pulled into Mike’s driveway. He had just locked his front door and was giving me a ‘wtf’ look.
“I thought I was coming over to your house?” he said as I slid out of my jeep and scurried my way over to him.
“I’ll explain inside.”
“Oookaaay then.” He unlocked the door again and we went inside.
“What’s going on man? You seem… I don’t know… flustered.” I raised an eyebrow at him and he just shrugged like he didn’t even know what flustered ment.
“Why don’t you get us some some rootbeers and meet me in the living room,” I said before I walked off and sat on the couch. Mike always had cans of rootbeer in his fridge. I was trying to figure out a way to confess this to him. He sat down in the recliner next to the couch and handed me my drink. I decided to start with walking in on Izzy. I blurted it out before he could ask what was wrong again.
“I walked in on Izzy masturbating in our room.” His face slowly changed. He looked shocked, but a huge smile stretched from ear to ear.
“No waaay! Oh my god are you okay? Fuck that must have been awkward! What did you do?”
“I just fucking stood there like an idiot. I didn’t know what to do until she screamed at me to get out.”
“What did it look like? What position? Tell me everything.”
His excitement about this disgusted me. I knew he wanted to bang my sister. He was trying to come off as curious and concerned but I know he wanted something to fantasize about later and that made me want to rip his adams apple out of his throat. I also knew that describing the whole scene would get me hard. Maybe it was better for him to find out this way. It was easier at least.
“She was on her hands and knees.”
He looked puzzled for a second.
“You know. On her belly with her ass up, legs spread like doggy style. Her pussy was wide open and she had her fingers in both holes.” The images floated before my eyes and I felt my dick twitch with a rush of blood.
“Her ass too?!” He questioned incredulously. I just nodded, imagining how tight her pussy would be. I wanted to get hard and I wanted him to see it because I wanted him to find out. My dick was rock hard as I imagined pounding away at my seventeen year old sister’s tight ass. I felt my face redden when he noticed. He looked confused at first and did a double take to make sure he wasn’t imagining my huge erection. He eyed me cautiously, peering at me through slitted eyes.
“You want to bone your sister don’t you?” He questioned still eyeing me. I kept my mouth shut and looked away.
“Oh my god! You do, don’t you!?”
I decided to stay silent and let the truth sink in. I watched his face go from shock, to surprise, to denial and then acceptance. He stayed surprisingly calm. A few minutes of silence flew by.
“What are you going to do?” He asked.
“I don’t know.” Was all I said.
“She doesn’t know?”
“No she doesn’t.” I was pleased he wasn’t judging me.
“You don’t know if she feels the same way?” he asked and I shook my head no. We sat there in silence. I bowed my head contemplating what I was going to do. I heard Mike’s Xbox 360 boot up and I turned my head to see a controller in Mike’s hand and the other one was being handed to me.
“Zombies?” I asked. He nodded. I grabbed the controller as the game started.
“Lets fuck up some FUCKING ZOMBIES!!” He screamed and I laughed, all my tense muscles relaxing. At least he could help me forget about this for awhile. It was good to get it off my chest.
Time flew by. It was nearing sunset and we finished four rootbeers each and a giant bag of cheetos.
“Fuck! Hell hounds!” I exclaimed. We were on the brink of being overrun. Mike and I were the only two left out of the four.
“Damn there’s too many! I could use some help you know. You really gonna let a bro die?” Mike said vigorously thumbing the controller.
“If you die on me I swear to god Mike!” In that instant, three zombies broke the barricades and killed him.
“Fuck!” I yelled jumping up. He was hysterically laughing so I punched him in the stomach.
“Ow! Asshole!” He said trying to stop laughing. We eventually calmed down.
“Well I better get home.” I said finally.
“Alright. My moms probably on her way here anyways. Help me clean up.” We cleaned up the cans and chip bag. He stopped me before I could leave.
“Hey I just want to say, I honestly don’t support how you feel about your sister but you’re my best friend and I wouldn’t let your disturbing needs get in the way of our friendship. So as your best friend, I’m telling you, you should probably tell her. What do you have to lose? Absolutely nothing? She’s your sister. She will have to learn to accept it. She lives with you.”
I knew he was right. I was just afraid of rejection. I had to face her.
“I guess you’re right. Thanks Mike.”
“Let me know how it goes man.” He called after me as I climbed in my jeep.
“No problem.” I called back and pulled out of the drive. I hurried home. I wasn’t supposed to leave in the first place. I was relieved to have someone know about my desire for my sister and pleased that person didn’t freak out. Now I just had to hope my baby sis was okay with this. She didn’t have to feel the same. I just needed her to know. My heart pounded as I pulled into the garage. I exited my jeep and slowly made my way inside. Izzy was sitting on the couch, a bowl of popcorn in her lap and a movie on. She turned to look up and her face turned red. She immediately got up and headed to our room.
“Izzy wait! We need to talk!’ I yelled after her.
“I don’t want to talk about anything.” She said still walking towards our room.
“Izzy stop.” I ran up to her and grabbed her by the arm halting her. She tried to pull away but I tightened my grip. Next thing I know I get punched in my mouth. It didn’t hurt but pissed me off for a split second, and in that split second I grabbed her by both arms and threw her on the living room rug.
“Fucking stop it and listen to me!” I shouted at her.
“No. I want to pretend it didn’t happen. Is that so hard?” She said attempting to stand. I pushed her back down and pinned her by her wrists, sitting on top of her.
“No we can’t just pretend. We have to talk about this and you need to hear me out.” The whole time I spoke she was repeating the word no and flailing around trying to get up. It was hard to hold her down without hurting her.
“Fuck it!” Was the last sentence to pass my lips before I smashed my body against hers and planted a passionate kiss on her mouth. She went limp and parted her lips, letting my tongue glide against hers. She was kissing me back. I couldn’t believe it. The kiss lasted long and we were breathing hard when we broke away. She looked up at me with her big doe eyes and whispered.
“Why?”
This wasn’t going exactly how I imagined it but I told her anyways.
“Because I want you Izzy. You’re the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen. You turn me on like no other girl can and you don’t even try. I know what you’re thinking. You probably don’t want to believe this because I’m your brother and yes I know I’m a jerk and I’m so sorry for that. Please just let me explain.” She stayed quiet but nodded. I was surprised she didn’t flip out. I let her get up and we sat on the couch.
“I just want you to know that I don’t hate you even though I act like I do. I only do that because I hate feeling this way about you but not being able to do anything about it because we’re related. I know it’s hard to understand how I can just accept wanting to bang my sister but it took me awhile. I’ve been feeling this way for a long time now. I understand if this disgusts you. I’m not asking you to feel the same. Just please understand.”
She stayed silent. Debating in her head what she wanted to say.
“I believe you Eric. To be honest, I had been fantasizing about you the past week. I feel like there’s something wrong with me. This scares me. I guess it makes me feel better to know it’s mutual and I’m not alone but… what do we do? What does this mean? Should we tell mom and dad?”
“NO!” I shouted, throwing my hands up like I could physically stop the thought. She looked startled at my outburst.
“You know mom and dad would freak.” I said and she nodded in agreement.
“You’re right. They’d probably take us out of school to homeschool us and get us counseling.” She laughed.
“Not to mention baptize us and pray every night that we’re forgiven for our sins.” We both chuckled. The first time in a long time that we bonded. I grabbed her face and kissed her again. She didn’t stop me but I caught her off guard.
“This doesn’t bother you does it?” I asked after pulling away. She shook her head no so I kissed her again. Her lips were so soft and her tongue was so smooth and slippery. God I just wanted her licking my cock so bad. I kissed her until we were gasping.
“Tell me Izzy. What were you thinking about when you fucked yourself earlier?” I asked in between kisses, gently playing with her hair. She hesitated.
“You’re making out with your brother but you can’t tell him who you were thinking about?” I questioned.
“That’s just it. I was thinking about you…well you and Mike but when I squirted I was fantasizing about you.” I stopped and pushed her back.
“Mike?!” I glared. Jealousy making me wish he wasn’t alive.
“Calm down Eric it’s not a big deal.”
A big deal?! Fuck yes it was!
“Prove to me you were thinking about me. Prove you want me like I want you.” I whispered in her ear, nibbling on it.
“How?” She asked. I flashed her a devious smile.
“Suck my cock Izzy. Right here, right now.” Her eyes widened.
“But I-I’ve never–.”
“I know.” I said interrupting her.
“It will be fine. Please just suck on it a little.” I pleaded biting my bottom lip seductively, looking into her eyes. I saw her melt with lust and she gave in. I unbuttoned my pants and told her to get in between my legs on the floor. She was trembling revealing how nervous she was. I squeezed her hand before pulling my cock from my jeans. My fully erect penis was now on display for my sister. She hesitantly grabbed it. Once her hand was around it she squeezed, making me grunt a little.
Knowing it was my sister and not some slut I called my girlfriend for a few weeks made me harder and bigger than I’ve ever been.
She started licking up the shaft of my dick, making me moan. Her tongue flicked over the head before wrapping her lips around it. Her mouth was so warm and moist. She began putting it farther in, wetting it immensely.
“Oh god Izzy mmm.” I gasped. She started sucking, creating loud slurping sounds.
“Fuck!” I moaned. Watching my baby sister go down on me made me want to instantly cum but I held it back. I grabbed a fist full of her blonde hair and started slowly pushing my cock deeper. She gagged and pulled away.
“It’s okay baby you can take it.” I said bringing her mouth back down on my dick. She slowly got it deeper, moaning the whole time. I loved that she was enjoying herself. Without warning she shoved my ten inch cock all the way down her throat. I gasped, bucking my hips and throwing my head back in ecstasy. She started sucking faster and faster and when she pulled away there were long strings of saliva connecting between her lips and my throbbing dick. She slurped it off before shoving it back in her mouth.
I began pushing her head until I was fucking her throat. She gave me complete control. My balls were slapping against her chin. She moaned causing a vibration to stimulate my dick.
“Oh Izzy FUCK YES!” I groaned as hot thick cum shot to the back of her throat. She clenched her fists into the couch cushions as I rammed away at her mouth. My load was bigger than its ever been. She couldn’t swallow it all. It dripped off her chin as she milked the last of it out of my cock. It had sprayed across her cheek and was dripping on the carpet.
I laid my head back panting. My dick went limp. Izzy was still in between my legs wiping her mouth. I looked down at her once more.
“That was amazing.” I stated and she blushed.
“Come here.” I beckoned her, taking off my shirt. She stood and I pulled her to my lap. I used my shirt to wipe away my cum on her face and then gently kissed her. She laid her head on my shoulder while I rubbed her body making her shudder.
“Thank you.” I whispered to her squeezing her softly. We stayed like that until we heard our parents open the front door. I practically threw her off me. We had to act normal which ment I had to act like an asshole even when I really didn’t want too. At least until tonight when we retreat to our room.
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With the amount of people treking aroound the jungle these days, I guess it is inevitable the someone gets too involved.
small town girl moves to city and uni world.
This is my first story. I wrote for me with some of my favorite fetishes in mind. The story grew on me. I was hoping to write something short and well structured, and I have ended up with a long ramble instead. I have probably tried to cram too much in and have not put enough detail into the story in a rush to finish it. Still, it is what it is and I hope other people will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.